Thursday, November 13, 2014

Self Critique

Sorry I'm Late

Major student suggestions were to work on the craft of my characters. Some suggested that my scenes were too short and needed to be a little longer. Most of them suggested there needs to be more work on the cinematography.

I agree with the students on all the feed back and have no disagreements about it.

After studying the critiques, I learned that I need connect the characters better, make my scene longer to clarify the situation more, and to work on my craft of the characters more and will make the following revisions: Character design, scene length, camera actions and more established shots between the two characters.