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Major student suggestions were to work on the craft of my characters. Some suggested that my scenes were too short and needed to be a little longer. Most of them suggested there needs to be more work on the cinematography.
I agree with the students on all the feed back and have no disagreements about it.
After studying the critiques, I learned that I need connect the characters better, make my scene longer to clarify the situation more, and to work on my craft of the characters more and will make the following revisions: Character design, scene length, camera actions and more established shots between the two characters.